i need the world to take a step back

 

 

 

 

                   I need the world to take a step back

 

                   I don't have the strength to hold the weight of you

 

                   I don't even have the strength to hold myself up

 

                  

                   I need for the world to give me room

 

                   how I'm I supposed to solve the problems

 

                   when I can't even look in the mirror

 

                    To solve my own problems

 

                      

 

                   Go back world to the everyday life

 

                   find a new shoulder to hold the weight

 

                   I am not your super hero,

 

                   I am just scared and unimportant

 

                   Just another hole left in the dirt

 

                

                   I will one day rise again and

                   

                   be the person you need me to be

 

                   I be that shoulder, super hero

 

                   but until then turn and walk out my window

 

                   shut lights off so i can dream of a world where

 

                    we can be together.

Reviews

[Skye]

I love this poem, even if it is a self-depreciating. But it talks of growing stronger and getting back on your feet. Its beautifully worded, and I adore the first three lines.

[Hope]

That was amazing it was like the oposite of Kryptonite by Three Doors Down. I loved it and it was well worded also.