Happiness will never be

Happiness will never be

A Poem by darkness*star1985

 

 

  Will a kiss ever touch my fair lips

    

            will a hand brace me before i fall

       

                     Will i look upon another eyes

 

 

                             No not just another eyes. His eyes

 

                                   Only his will do,

 

                                  

    Completely confused

                         

            unsure what to do

 

                    do i risk it all

 

                           or just let it fall

 

      

                                      If all fails

 

     happiness will never be

 

            only thing i need

 

                 is for my heart feel no pain.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 darkness*star1985


Author's Note

darkness*star1985
I wrote this because i decided that i will never be happy, because i don't think i will let myself, i enjoy things in my life, but to be totally happy i just can't but i rather be unhappy then have my heart break everyday because a guy takes granted, or uses you as a floor mat. i am and will always have the love of my heart but i don't think i will have that again nor i dont know if i would wanted it, i can only see one heart hurt at a time and i rather it be me.

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well sometimes you need to go through a couple heart brakes before you find the one who will heal and mend your broken heart and never hurt you for the rest of your guys lives. i have come to learn with heart brake there would be no love and also if you don't allow the sadness to come and go happiness can never come and never leave. such as you can find that one person who would never brake your heart but how can you let them in and you won't allow yourself to feel any emotion that is the worse thing that you can do is bottle your emotions but any ways sorry about the lecture. But i really enjoyed the poem the emotion was portrayed beautifully, the word choice was perfect, and i can relate to this very well and i promise someday the prefect man or guy will come into your life and these feelings will seize to exist. Great Job i enjoyed this very much i certainly hope to see more and remember always keep your head up that is the best thing to do for yourself. :D

~Your friend Skylar Bay

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The problem with the emotion of love and life. You must test both. Take no chances. Know no pain or pleasure. I like the story and questions in the poem. Love and life open many doors. Option of a brave soul to take chances and test life. Thank you for the excellent poem. You made me think.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


well sometimes you need to go through a couple heart brakes before you find the one who will heal and mend your broken heart and never hurt you for the rest of your guys lives. i have come to learn with heart brake there would be no love and also if you don't allow the sadness to come and go happiness can never come and never leave. such as you can find that one person who would never brake your heart but how can you let them in and you won't allow yourself to feel any emotion that is the worse thing that you can do is bottle your emotions but any ways sorry about the lecture. But i really enjoyed the poem the emotion was portrayed beautifully, the word choice was perfect, and i can relate to this very well and i promise someday the prefect man or guy will come into your life and these feelings will seize to exist. Great Job i enjoyed this very much i certainly hope to see more and remember always keep your head up that is the best thing to do for yourself. :D

~Your friend Skylar Bay

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem, and I wish you the best.

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautifully recorded, this feeling of helplessness in love that has gone or never begun, I can really relate to this write. wonderful job capturing this feeling.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully written my friend.....I wish this for you......Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago



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