waiting for you

 

 I can feel you fading from me

 

  i can almost see you if i hold tight to my memories

         

   but i will be waiting right here for you

                          

     i discover i will watch for you in the distance

 

      i can't not sleep until your beside me again

     

        i will be waiting for you in the dead of the night

            

          for you to come back and whisper a kiss on my lips

 

            if it takes 3 or 30 years i will be waiting for you.

   

            

    

                              

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice artwork and i like the story. 3-30 years. Somethings are worth waiting for I believe. I like the feel and the strong ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

I actually felt this one although I may have it all wrong but for me it touches something within me that still plagues my heart. I loved how you managed to compose this. It is flawless.

[Mockingbird]

shows fidelity and patience. that is one lucky guy to have someone suffer him all the years of his absence and still stay true. great poem.

[Corset]

I understand this kind of dedication, though porbably not best for us in the long run, you can end up missing out on a lot of life that way. The pic goes with this writing really well, the desolation of waiting, very powerful.

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i understand this i think everybody has someone like this in there life and it suckz when that person leaves and all you want to do is cry and never move on from that moment and you captured that feeling perfectly and it seems like you will never find love again and sometime you never want to but the truth is you will someday you have to go through a bunch of frogs until you find your prince so hun don't be stuck in the past because it will get better some day and if you ever need someone to talk to i am here for you :D but anyways great write i loved and enjoyed reading this piece and once again you captured the emotion perfectly :D