Thousand Times

 

 

 

Thousand things i can write

nothing make since

my pen out of ink

no words can explain

why i sit here alone

should i be alone

 

Thousand thoughts linger in my ears

can't answer not a one

never been to sure

how i am supposed to feel

wish i can be frozen for sometime

wake up as a new someone

ease all these memories

turn me to i should be

 

 

Thousand times

Don't turn you back on me

i am all you want me to be

so why do you sit here alone

i am nowhere to be found

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Thousand thoughts linger in my ears
can't answer not a one
never been to sure
how i am supposed to feel"
The mind can make us crazy. Do we stay or run? I like the thoughts and the very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Shay]

I like it alot , good

[Raven Starhawk]

My impression of this...I am not sure actually but it still makes me think back to a time not so long ago when internet people tried to ruin me. I don't know why I think about this while reading your poem. O_O I guess because I felt I had to draw into myself in order to prevent any more abuse.

[Cloud Andrews]

Wow. I am in love with this poem. I can visualize it so well! I feel like I can relate with this poem. It's dark but I get this feeling of melancholy but yet peacefulness if that makes any sense. I am loving your work so far ^_^

[Amanda]

This was good despite a few grammatical errors. I often feel the same and although I can't leave a paper trail so my pen's rarely run out of ink. Keep writing!

[Corset]

I get a definate feeling of getting lost in yourself to avoid life's pitfalls, I like how you made the character disappear completely like falling into her / his own well and not being able to get out so he/ she just sits at the bottom of her own mind.

[harry]

hummmm....this one is nice ...good job

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i enjoyed this a lot and i can relate very well to this! i hope this moment and thinking will pass soon for you but any ways great write! keep writing!

[darkness*star1985]

thank you, i been wishing those moment of my thinking will pass soon too. but its like i am stuck, until i write the prefected peom for how i feel and then i feel like i could move on. i try so hard not to writed all the same thing all the time... but i am tormented at the time.... please bare with me..... thank you again for you review, alway enjoy what you have to say about my writes

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

it was my pleasure and don't worry i have been stuck like that too thats why a lot of my poems aren't up because they are all very depressing i have a lot of poetry i have not shared with anyone i won't even dare to look at it and i always enjoy read your work sad or not it is always great :D

[Skye]

It felt kinda erratic, but maybe you meant it to be that way? Good poem.