my earth

is a bunch of square dinner plates

green as the summer was the split second i lost my mind

covered in coupons covered in potholes

that mean

nothing

after the 31st of this month

and the dinner plates

theyre chipped

but you got a good deal

and we can die with that.

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Great write..

[KAREN]

if one can die with good deals then that is all we need! Good job!

[What happened to simple..]

there's something really quirky about this that I like =)