10-31-10

and i remember

the demise of

a white tee shirt

that was dripping with your colors

and intentional blemishes

of man-made ancestry 

that

like to share

but not under water

not under water.

I remember

sitting and

laughing at things that were sinister in their time

why arent they now?

why arent we now?

why am i

sitting in the sunup

dancing in dental floss

bare skinned

and sucking room temperature soup

off my wrists?

Reviews

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This is just true talent here. Line after line.
I really admire the last question.
Impressive.
So Creative!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you use words. I had to read this poem a few times. So many lines left the reader a opening to think and image. I like so many statements you made in this poem.
"I remember
sitting and
laughing at things that were sinister in their time"
A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote