on the edge

of velvet seats

on the edge of a bed that belongs to itself

i depict every line with brittle eyes

sticky hooks stretched out in front

encircled by night, encircled by luminescence

reverberations against the broody army

deafening

we didnt even try to apprehend

the words in our mind dance with the earth in the hollow cheeked streaks of light

casting back into space

everything is eclipsed

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:we didnt even try to apprehend
the words in our mind dance with the earth in the hollow cheeked streaks
of light
casting back into space
everything is eclipsed "
~i love the symbolism and the way
you make fun of adjectives~

(awesome Poetess)
(u need to put a chapbook together Ashley :)