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Shh.. Baby; Don't Move,

This will All be over Soon.

Tell yourself it's just A Dream;

Tell yourself;

'this Isn't as It Seems'

Please don't try to get away;

It'll all be faster if you just stay;

Shh.. Baby; stay still,

I'm just having a short thrill.

Shh.. Hun;

I'm almost done,

I've had my fun,

Now I leave my victim here..

Curled up and crying in fear.

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow, I liked this piece... This can be taken in so many ways from rape to abuse to vampire attack. This was really good, I loved the formatting of the piece the change in font and size added alot to it. my only problem was in some areas it was a little small and hard to read but other than that this was Amazing! A really powerful poem. Great Job