See what the world does?

Kinda old, but what the hay.

 I'm not sure why,
But you guys,
sometimes I want to just die,
leave this world behind,
escape the hurt and depression,
and everybodies obsession,
with fighting,
I'm sick of this,
Take a look at what this world has done to me,
Just a fourteen year old girl,
Almost new to the world,
I've already had my beating heart ripped from chest,
I don't deserve this, do I?
They've driven me to the brink,
of insanity,
f*****g cruel to me,
And I'm never going to be the same again,
never again,
the cold world ripped my adolescence away,
tell me you love me,
then just sit and watch,
I can never be that little girl again,
They've taken that from,
No longer innocent,
innocence ripped away too,
I'm just a little girl,
Longing for love,
Yearning for your acceptence,
Hankering to find my place,
Lost in this cold dark world,
Smiling on the outside,
Dying on the inside,
Razor's edge,
Cold and sharp,
drag along,
this human flesh,
my unwanted pressence fading closed,
See what you did?
Shove me,
Spit at me,
Spread your slander,
Watch,
You may not like what you create,
You may not like what you create.

Reviews

[Matthew V. H.]

Powerful stuff there.

You captured the thoughts of someone who is suicidal pretty well. The imagery was great and you can really feel the hurt and frustration leap off the page.

great poem all together.

cole-