Power

Lies, Betrayal, Guilt, Deaths and Pain- Power. The Beginning of the End.

Power

 

 

Power is the key to changes in you

 

Others start to notice that you defy

 

I never thought it would be you, but who knew?

 

And others can’t trust because you imply

 

 

 

 

You stand deserted and mostly alone

 

And no one wants you for your selfless ways

 

This is the outcome and you must have known

 

Must deal with others and their betrays

 

 

 

You must be comforted with what is yours

 

Because soon you will be empty handed

 

You must listen to God and his implores

 

If you do well your heart will be mended

 

 

 

 

The past doesn’t exist, just you and now

 

Power will never control, it’s a vow

 

Author's Note

Another Sonnet for my Macbeth Thingyyy. Hope you like :]

I'm an amateur at poems- Never really wrote any.

Reviews

[JC]

I like the implications of strength in this, in blazing forward and leaving the naysayers and hangers on to the wayside, forging a path with power...

[Moyo]

This is an excellent poem. The rhyming is top-notch and the message is comprehensive. It was short and to the point, I like that. I enjoyed reading this piece, thanks.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the inner struggle in this piece. Life is unfair at times, but maybe we can change things.

[melissa]

nice work:)

[Ashleyy]

Thankks Soo muchh!

Glad, you enjoyed it.

:]

[chloe cruz]

Wow, I really liked this. The flow was great.

"The past doesn't exist, just you and now
Power will never control, it's a vow."

Enjoyed, and loved, the ending a lot! Great job.

Chloe.