The Monster

Your lies are well crafted.

Years of practice

has proved that true.

I try to show you

my thoughts, my feelings.

But really,

Who are we kidding here ?

 

These reasons you give me

are total bluffs.

I see right thorugh your mask.

You play the part perfectly.

You know, stepford mom and all.

Everyone loves you.

But they never see the real

You.

The Monster.

 

The one that brings

The fear

The tears

to my eyes.

Reviews

[Crinkle°]

wow, that was intense, certainely also cos it talks to me so well.

[deeps]

I really loved your first stanza alot
This is a very well written write. I Like this.

[122009]

This is so great. Plenty of feeling, but not overbearing.

I think a lot of people have a figure known as "the monster" in their lives.