Pretend

Hey there sunshine

Do you remember the days

Those good old days

Oh way back when ?

I don't

Not even a faint memory

Lately our days have been filled

With tears and swears and hurt

We can't go mere hours

Without something coming up

Like an unsolved problem

It just keeps coming back

We've gone past help

We're completly hopeless

It's so much better

When we just

Pretend.

Reviews

[deeps]

We've gone past help
We're completly hopeless
It's so much better
When we just
Pretend.

Amazing words here.
This is a wonderful write.

[122009]

We've gone past help
We're completly hopeless
It's so much better
When we just
Pretend.

I absolutely, completely LOVE this part. I like how you end all of your poems, I think...
Anyway, that part just stands out. Maybe it's because I know exactly what you mean. When things are so terrible that nothing can make them better... pretending seems to be the only way to get through it.