Missin' You

What has this all come to ?

Where did it all go ?

Why am I alone tonight ?

Come on babe, do you know ?

 

I'm walking around with a hole right inside me

Baby, I'm afraid to breathe

What can I do to get you back ?

I need to find a way please

 

I'm craving your presence

Your arms wrapped in mine

Your honey sweet voice

Telling me it'll be fine

 

But I can't get you back

Believe me, I tried

No matter how much I beg

Or how much I cry

 

But I'll still wait for you

For the rest of my life

My one true love

Come on home tonight

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[122009]

But I'll still wait for you
For the rest of my life
My one true lovve
Come on home tonight


I absolutely love this stanza. (small typo in love*)

This poem is so strong.. I really like it.

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oh i think like my own heart is speaking in your lines..

lovely lovely melancholy and sweet.

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I'm walking around with a hole right inside me
Baby, I'm afraid to breathe
What can I do to get you back ?
I need to find a way please

I so know these feelings hereI love the whole
write but these lines grabbed me. Well written