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How Can I ?

How Can I ?

A Poem by ashleydawn

How can I sit in a room

That's filled to the top

With people I've known for years

How can I sit in a room

That is so very loud

The tables are shaking

How can I sit in a room

Where I can barely breathe

And feel so alone ?

© 2010 ashleydawn


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This is another poem that's easily relatable.. you did a really nice job with it, I can feel the emotion in it.

I like it a lot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this, I can kind of relate to this write
Very well stated. I enjoyed reading this.
Very well written out feelings

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 5, 2010
Last Updated on May 31, 2010

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