Make Believe

I'm laying here

In the dark

Willing myself to sleep

But my brain won't shut off

With thoughts of you and I

In the land of make believe

Reviews

[122009]

This is very simply stated, but nicely done.

I like it, a lot.

[deeps]

I like this, very well written and said

[Mitch*Dandy]

cool poem! I like this soo much! I sometimes do that but I think about other things as well... Thanks for sharing.