Your everything

Your everything

A Poem by Ashley
"

People see your physical flaws, the flaws of someone normal. But I see you, your personality. You are the best person

"

Your toes

With one slightly

Smaller nail

Your legs

Which you refuse

To shave

Your hips

Not the hourglass

That society expects

Your stomach

Which isn’t 3 inches

Smaller than your hips

Your hands

Which, unknown to them

Create art that is beautiful

Your arms

Littered with freckles

From too long outside

Your mouth

With small lips

From which spill beautiful ideas

Your nose

Slightly twisted from

When you broke it

Your eyes

Brown but

Filled with emotion

Your hair

Tangled and

Ordinary

 

From a glance

You might be dismissed

 

But

 

Your laugh

When your friends

Tell you jokes

Your eyes

Red from crying

Because you care too much

Your music

Entrancing notes

Made by talented fingers

Your mind

Sharp, Intelligent

Ever imagining

Your anger

Driven by your love

For that which is ruined

Your trust

There for us

Always by our side

Your care

Loving us

For who we are

Your delights

In things

I’ve never heard of

Your patience

For when we

Are tired and stupid

Your tolerance

For when we aren’t

Who we are supposed to be

 

From years of trust

You are the best person

© 2016 Ashley


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I love this. How the details are just the small things that make up who this person is to the author. Such beautiful lines that slowly build an imaginary person in the mind for the reader. I also like how you shift how the words are aligned, like you want every one to notice that she isn't a nobody, and there are more things than meet the eye. Beyond her scars and freckled body, are her emotions that make her who she is. Whether you made it a personal poem or not, it feels as if the author loves who they are writing about very much. Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

I love this. How the details are just the small things that make up who this person is to the author. Such beautiful lines that slowly build an imaginary person in the mind for the reader. I also like how you shift how the words are aligned, like you want every one to notice that she isn't a nobody, and there are more things than meet the eye. Beyond her scars and freckled body, are her emotions that make her who she is. Whether you made it a personal poem or not, it feels as if the author loves who they are writing about very much. Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

173 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on November 10, 2016
Last Updated on November 15, 2016

Author

Ashley
Ashley

New Zealand



About
I live in NZ, I go to college. I mostly write poems. more..

Writing
I will fight I will fight

A Poem by Ashley


Maybe Maybe

A Poem by Ashley