As the name of your title suggests, it seems that the book would be on values of friendship & comradeship between the two protagonists. The description of post apocalyptic world could have been more elaborate but it has been pretty good otherwise. I sense an inspiration from the Harry Potter books to a slight degree but it looks like this could be a very nice fantasy adventure. The last dialogue was catchy and almost screen material. Good job there ! Overall it is a pretty good start. Will be looking out how it goes
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As the name of your title suggests, it seems that the book would be on values of friendship & comradeship between the two protagonists. The description of post apocalyptic world could have been more elaborate but it has been pretty good otherwise. I sense an inspiration from the Harry Potter books to a slight degree but it looks like this could be a very nice fantasy adventure. The last dialogue was catchy and almost screen material. Good job there ! Overall it is a pretty good start. Will be looking out how it goes