I Wish

just for fun and kind of an inspirational one.

I wish I could dig a hole,

And touch the sky from below.

I wish I could fly so low,

To catch the fire as it blows.

 

I wish I could say my heart a Hi!

Going to her house with a shy.

I wish I could live my dream in my life,

Making and carving with a simple knife.

 

I wish to stand by the door of thy,

Giving people order not to cry.

I wish I can eat a pie,

Which can fill the stomach of every boy.

 

I wish to go very high,

From where everything seems so tiny.

I wish I could shine like a diamond in the sky,

Which can only be held high. 

Author's Note

Please ignore any mistakes if any as this is my first one.

Reviews

[Libby]

Really strong beginning and really uplifting. The flow needs a little work and the rhyming structure. I really liked this one

[Mr.Etc]

thank you for that review buddy.
actually i wrote this almost year ago.
will post my new work soon.
Thanks for that review that really means a lot.