Just A Little Nothing

I wrote this the other day, and deemed it unfinished. When I re-read it, I decided to leave it as-is. Commentary is always welcome. I need some criticism on this one.

I sit to blend in with the wall,
and wonder
why we get worked up
by rolling thunder.
Can something with such
striking beauty be
masked by our fear?
as we fail to see
the stars that dance
beyond dark clouds.
Are we truly afraid,
or just too proud?

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

I have two small grammatical suggestions, but other than that, its perfect.

Perhaps change "worked up by rolling..." to "worked up over rolling..."
Also, I would change "something with such striking...." to "something of such..."

Other than that, I would leave it as-is. Nicely done.