Fantasy

Why live in reality? Sometimes an escape is healing...

Rain falls outside,

a reminder that reality is

just around the corner.

But you and I

are much more content

inside this dream.

Together we dance,

alone in the moonlight

to a song that's never

been written.

And all the while,

I wonder what walking

through rain with you

would be like.

But perhaps I'm only dreaming.

Author's Note

This one strikes me as odd. But, it came out when the pen hit paper.
Feedback is appreciated! (:

Reviews

[Que]

"Together we dance,
alone in the moonlight
to a song that's never
been written."
Breathtaking lines. I absolutely loved this poem. Great job!
Cheers and have a good day. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Fantasy is a good thing. Need sweet dreams to keep us feeling alive and to have possibilities. I like the story in this poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[nicolo]

Pardoxically, wishful thinking or fantasizing can make you realize more of what's real. It makes aware of what you want and fear. An escape heals, but never fully cures something.

I really like the poem. Makes me think about the things I want and more.