Prologue

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Prologue:

This story is about the four groups of the ancient hunters that are joining the dark side. There are only 3 skilled hunters that were not hypnotized by the dark magic and it's evil forces.
But one day, a lonely kid who's age was 14 walked in the forests. His name was Harvell.
He was sitting under a tree and his nostalgic remembrances were returning in his mind. But suddenly, the melancholically relaxation was disturbed by a shout. He then ran to the place where he heard it from, and saw a troll attacking someone that was on the ground. This person had blue marks on his face, that were indicating that he was a hunter.
The boy took his hand crafted knife and climbed a tree. He then cut off a tick branch that fell on the troll, leaving him unconscious.
-Thanks kid! You gave me a helpful aid!- said him. My name is Kiyros.
-My name is Harvell.- then they heard some people shouting: "Kiyros! Kiyros, where are you?".
-I am here, friends!
-Hey, friend, are you alright?-asked one of them.
-Yeah, I'm fine, don't worry friends!-they looked then to the kid.
-Who is he?-asked the single girl from their team.
-Oh, he is the child who saved my life! Veyra, Averon, he is Harvell. Harevell, they are my fellow hunters, Veyra and Averon.   They had marks on their face, too, so they were hunters as well.
-Glad to meet you, said the two to him.
-Same!
-So, how exactly saved this boy your life?-asked the one with a sword, Averon.
-Oh, that's an interesting thing, I will tell you! So...
He then told everything to his counterparts, and they were impressed. The tree hunters wanted to test the kid. So they did.
Averon took a small branch and threw it to Harvell with great reflexes. The boy responded with a quick move that included the unsheathing of his knife and cutting of the branch.
-Kid, we would be glad if we would have you in our team!
-I would be glad!-he answered.

Reviews

[_nymphofthecross_]

Their names are awesome! The way you wrote this reminds me of Harry Potter.(I haven't read those books in a while so I could be rusty on that thought). You are very good at crafting dialogue. Maybe you could add more detail as to the scenery and what the characters are like. (I apologize if you do this in the first chapter I have not read that yet.) I love this sort of storytelling

[Ashle]

I am glad you liked it!! It's really nice to hear that! :) Now, I think this will be a good idea, to say more about how they are looking. :)