The Princess

Dedicated to my princess....

Two strangers,

Different stories.

One is mad,

Another is mystery.

 

Twenty one years have passed,

No one had ever understood him.

Then the princess came,

And sat beside him.

 

 She put her hand on his shoulder

And asked “Why to bother?”

“Let’s prove to the world,

We are stronger than before.”

 

 She talks for hours,

And he waits whole day.

But it's the night, which let them meet,

At Writerscafe.

 

Don’t know about future,

But maybe this is destiny,

Or may be their luck,

Which has turned it heavenly?

Author's Note

It's not a poem, just a way to say thanks to my princess for coming into my life :)

Reviews

[Johnny Dep]

She put her hand on his shoulder
And asked “Why to bother?”
“Let’s prove to the world,
We are stronger than before.”

Seems a bit of love but you conveyed it as a friend, may I know what it is, and a great write Ashish.

[Ayushi Beura]

Pleasant reading!!! sugary and attractive
you have done a great work
I like reading such fantasy poems n this one too I love it!!!
awesome

[Ashish]

thanks Ayushi... :)

[Manisha]

Awesome one never saw such love and so much heart touching lines uff..
this one touched me emotionally.....

[Ashish]

Thank you so much Manisha....:)

[Anindita Janhabee]

oye Mani!!!
tu aa gayi online...
wow... nd yes, thank u for reviewing my apple Bear s beautiful poem....

[Manisha]

yr ani dono ka review comment mujhe ek saat mila

[Ashish]

Good coincidence ...haha...
Btw again thank you ...
from Apple bear...

[Anindita Janhabee]

u idiot, she doesn't cl u apple Bear... apple Bear is mine ....

[Anindita Janhabee]

nd yep, Mani... i already texted u abt the coincidence... now saying "it's a coincidence " by both of us is again a coincidence!!!

[DoormanDan]

This is a touching tribute to your sweetheart, man. I really enjoyed reading it, and could feel the sense of gratitude you were trying to convey. Also, I really like the font and format you used here. It really works with the piece. Fantastic job, my fellow writer! :)

[Ashish]

Thank you so much for reading & reviewing this :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

impressive writing!
"Don’t know about future,
But maybe this is destiny,
Or may be their luck,
Which has turned it heavenly?"
loved it!

[Ashish]

Thank you :)

[matrixmark]

Such a sweet poem. People meet under all different circumstances and some are so judgemental as to how they met. In my eyes - what the hell does it matter.

This poem is packed with emotion and honesty - flows nice and smooth. Just such a nice read.

Mark.

[Ashish]

Thank you so much mark... :)

[matrixmark]

Welcome - It was a pleasure to read an honest piece.

Mark.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh my god Ashish!!!!!!!
you are incredible yaar...............
kahina bhi ki lekhicha....
chupa rustam...
bohut bhala heichi.....
can't thank u enough dear.......
great dedication!!!!
😃😃😃😊😘

[Ashish]

If kahideithaanti , then dedication kemiti heithaanta?

Thanks for reading :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

kahin heinathanta ?
surprise heinathanta...yes...

[Anindita Janhabee]

but it's the other way round...
Rather, I must thank u for coming into my life as a very good person...😃

with token of love and due respect from my side...

keep writing and moving...

[Ashish]

Yup, will try my best :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

And you must... Apple Bear....

[barleygirl]

Many times young people meet on WritersCafe & then write love poems that sound kinda flat & predictable to me. That's why it's such a delight to read your love poem which tells a specific, detailed story about your unique experience, full of details & honesty & openness. I wish you both the very best in continuing your friendship longterm.

[Ashish]

Thank you so much. It's kind a place where people of same thoughts collaborate. And moreover they understand each other...

I also wish, may our friendship last forever

[barleygirl]

The reason I've met so many more great friends on this website (compared to years of being on Facebook, for example) is becuz people here ENJOY communicating! I like that! I need that in a friend -- show me how you feel. This is a great community of writers (((HUGS)))