Fake

Fake

A Poem by Ashish
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They broke my friendship, dedicated to them...

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Once they were friends now they are all contacts,

Now they don’t even send a message

Because, with me, they had never a contract.

Once they were telling “Old is Gold” and will never forget you,

Now they are acting like puppets that don’t have any clue.

 

They had said that I was special for them,

Now their ego is important and for me, they left blame.

In past they were seems to be special,

And now the same persons left me when my life is crucial.

 

I owe them for all those fashioned memories,

I owe them for all those selfish fun,

I owe all their hollow words and fake promises,

I also owe their “important time”

Please…Never come back in my life

I am removing the burden of this friendship

And setting all of you free.

 

Time is rolling,

Days and nights are passing,

Months are changing,

And a year is standing on its ending,

I know you all are “busy” and

This explanation is simple and easy

My so called “Best Friends!!”

I am grateful for all your sake,

Coz  I understand now that…

All those things were fake.

© 2016 Ashish


Author's Note

Ashish
2016 showed me new colors of life. Some of my best friends leave me just by saying I am not their type and I am deeply hurt by their words. But I will never miss them anymore.

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I understand your message completely. In the past couple years, I've let go of people who do not respond to me & who do not engage regularly. I don't want to be just part of your friends list. If we can't interact regularly, it's just a farce to me. You've expressed what I've felt so many times. At first it feels like this realization is hurtful & hard to face, but later it feels like you've grown strong from the subtle betrayal. I am thankful for what these shallow friends taught me about valuing the ones that put out the effort to share & be there regularly (((HUGS)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashish

8 Years Ago

Thanks ma'am for reviewing this..yes it really hurt when u see the real face of peoples...
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Some people will be in your life forever, others only for awhile and a few never really were. I think you express that message strongly and fuel it with your own personal experiences. The first stanza and the part about the "contracts" is a nice metaphor, and I like the closing lines most of all; an all too true statement. Thank you for sharing this relatable and rich writing Ashish!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashish

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jack for your kind words.
Wish u a very very happy new year :)
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

8 Years Ago

You are welcome and happy new year to you as well!
I can ralate to this pretty well. I know how it is to have so called friends and they for whaever reason they desert you and go on there way.

Trusting people is hard to do, when the make fake promises and never live up to their word. People are so fickle nowadays and a lot are just out for themselves.

Very relatable and satistying read.

Mark.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashish

8 Years Ago

Thank you Mark for this warm review.
Wish you a happy new year :)
matrixmark

8 Years Ago

100 per cent welcome

Mark.

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Tags: feelings, emotions, year, simple, Breakup, Friendship

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Ashish
Ashish

Patna, India



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