A Tale of Fairy

I love fantasy. I always think these sort of things in my mind. So this is a small description of one of my fantasy.

Castle of blue which will be made of thick glass,

Strong like ancient rock where nothing can clash.

The charm of your face will be worth watching, I suppose

When you will see our big garden with every color of rose.

The “Dove’s Waterfall” will be nature’s Jacuzzi,

Who has two daughters; swan princesses.

You will enjoy their company,

Whenever you want to be refreshed.

 

Royal will be the Celebration and all people will sing

When I propose with the diamond moon on your ring

Spring will come and joy it will bring

Queen will be you and I’ll be the King.

 

Historical will be our reign,

As you will be the defense of me.

I will be the symbol of strength,

Where you will be the symbol of peace.

 

And then one day dark clouds will gulp our kingdom;

As the devil will come.

Don’t be afraid at that time,

As your king will never let you down.

If I will come back victorious then we will celebrate,

And if not, O’ my Queen! Don’t cry...

As my soul will always be there to protect you..

 

This will be real as nothing in this is imaginary,

No one has such power to bury emotions extraordinary.

I know! This may not be considered epistolary.

Because this is never meant to be a story.

This is “A Tale of Fairy”

Author's Note

I hope you can fantasize what I had done. Feel free to share whatever comes in your heart after reading this. I will welcome any suggestion for improvisation or detection of any mistake if I made. Thank you :)

Reviews

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

A fantasy with a classical and enchanting vibe. I like how this is a mix between a fairytale and a sort of promise of how a couple's relationship could be. The second and final stanzas are excellent and the descriptions throughout this poem are well done.

The only thing I noticed is in the fourth stanza, "dark cloud" could be "dark clouds" or "a dark cloud" to make it fit better. Thank you for sharing!

[Ashish]

Thank you for the correction Jack , I will rectify it immediately :)

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

No prob and you're welcome! It's a good poem.

[Anindita Janhabee]

I must say, the best work of yours till now......as per me.....
just this much says all I guess.....
i love your fantasy..........
that's all.....
keep it up 👍👍👍👏👏👏

[Ashish]

So sweet of you :)
That was a big complement..

Thanks Ani.. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

you're welcome...

[Adam Adams]

quite interesting. a tale of king & his queen is very brightly painted upon these heartfelt words. fun. love, & remorse... everything's nicely poured down here around. very catchy it is. and i guess, it's always worth spending some time with suchlike stuffs that're better stirred up with anew trail of emotionalism.

[Ashish]

Thanks Adam ! For your kind words :)