An Early Morning's Dream

Well, I rarely had any dreams when I sleep. It's hardly two or three times in a year. Today I had an awesome dream which I want to share with all of you guys.

Yesterday before going to sleep

I had put the alarm

Early morning it rang at 4.15am

And broke the silence of my room which was calm

 

I switched off the alarm and sat on the bed

My eyes were closed and body was straight

I felt lazy and a big yawn came

I went to bed and sleep again

 

After a while I found myself in front of someone

She was smiling while I was calm

It was like a movie running in slow motion

I felt for a while that time had stopped

She showed me thumbs up and told me to keep it up

 

I don’t know what happened next

As when my eyes opened it was already 6.00Am

I realize that it was just a dream

Which was came to my mind in an early morning

 

Its true that dream has no reality,

And it will never come true.

It is nothing; but an illusion of my mind,

And it’s unreal point of view.

But I realize…

That something will never goanna change about you

Because being with you is like a dream come true...

Author's Note

It is not a poem... I just wanted to express this.
Thank You...

Reviews

[Ayushi Beura]

Ohhhhh its so so so beautiful
never ever read as pretty n sweet poem earlier
each n every line is just so sweet n perfectly arranged...I liked the way u represented ur poem so calmly n its so expressive as well
never read such a simple n beautiful poem earlier.
this piece of ur really express the passion of creativity of urs
great work...will love to read ur more poems

[Ashish]

Hey, thank you so much Ayushi,, :)
I am glad that it is giving the vibes which I want to convey..

[AquaWater5674]

I really liked the flow of this poem...
Time ...alarms...dreams...
So much symbolism...
It had a rthymic quality to it
Well Written
Debbie

[Ashish]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this.. :)

[Jasbir Kaur]

I appreciate your work.
Good job

[Ashish]

Thank you :)

[horizon]

very nice dream of your special someone...thanks for sharing

[Ashish]

Thank you for reading :)

[Asya Kardzhaliyska]

I really liked the final line of this, it had a tragic ring of truth to it that I could really relate to and tied up the rest of the stanzas nicely.

I personally felt that the last line of the first stanza needed a little bit of rephrasing. So instead of saying: "And broke the silence of my room which was calm" maybe consider saying: "and it broke the calmness of my room", I personally feel this would flow a lot better with the rest of the imagery that you've presented. But of course, it's only a suggestion!

Keep writing!

[Ashish]

Thanks for the suggestion and reviewing Asya...I had written just to have matching words like "alarm" and "calm"..
But still I appreciate your suggestion ... :)

[Ayushi Sharma]

dreams r thoughts of our minds.....

Jo hum sochte hain wahi sapne banke nind mein dikhte hain...

[Ashish]

Yes.. U r true ..but it is also true that dreams have no reality..

[Ashish]

Hey! Thanks for reading :)

[Ayushi Sharma]

wc...tum b sahii ho....sapne sirf soch hain hamare brain ki

[Anindita Janhabee]

Once again a tribute...
Very well penned... the thoughts and emotions come out with motion and them slowly get trapped in the heart of the reader....
keep writing...

[Ashish]

Haha...thank you dear :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

My pleasure...

[Anindita Janhabee]

I appreciate when people convey their personal nd sweet feelings forming poetry......... like u hv done here.... i like the way you did here...

[Ashish]

Thanks dear
Thanks for sharing your feelings by this poetry

[Anindita Janhabee]

Always welcome ...

[Maddy Raye]

Your really good at writing. I like the way you express how you feel about this girl. Keep writing. :)

[Ashish]

Thank you Maddy for the compliment..
I always try my best to express my feelings..but I know I feel shortage of words in me..but I am working on this..
Thanks again for reading :)

[Maddy Raye]

Your welcome :)