An Early Morning's Dream

Well, I rarely had any dreams when I sleep. It's hardly two or three times in a year. Today I had an awesome dream which I want to share with all of you guys.

Yesterday before going to sleep

I had put the alarm

Early morning it rang at 4.15am

And broke the silence of my room which was calm

 

I switched off the alarm and sat on the bed

My eyes were closed and body was straight

I felt lazy and a big yawn came

I went to bed and sleep again

 

After a while I found myself in front of someone

She was smiling while I was calm

It was like a movie running in slow motion

I felt for a while that time had stopped

She showed me thumbs up and told me to keep it up

 

I don’t know what happened next

As when my eyes opened it was already 6.00Am

I realize that it was just a dream

Which was came to my mind in an early morning

 

Its true that dream has no reality,

And it will never come true.

It is nothing; but an illusion of my mind,

And it’s unreal point of view.

But I realize…

That something will never goanna change about you

Because being with you is like a dream come true...

Author's Note

It is not a poem... I just wanted to express this.
Thank You...

Reviews

[Ayushi Beura]

Ohhhhh its so so so beautiful
never ever read as pretty n sweet poem earlier
each n every line is just so sweet n perfectly arranged...I liked the way u represented ur poem so calmly n its so expressive as well
never read such a simple n beautiful poem earlier.
this piece of ur really express the passion of creativity of urs
great work...will love to read ur more poems

[Ashish]

Hey, thank you so much Ayushi,, :)
I am glad that it is giving the vibes which I want to convey..

[matrixmark]

Beautiful read Ashish.

Nicely rhymed - it just flowed.....

The girl.....who is she or is tha left for us to interpret - either wasy - such a nice touch.

Mark.

[Ashish]

Thank you so much Mark.
Haha...She is my dreamgirl :)

[Zoya]

Clean use of rhyming words. A nice and sweet poem!!

[Ashish]

Thanks for reading this piece, Zoe :)

[Zoya]

You're welcome ;)

[Sira YR]

I really liked your poem. It was very interesting. Keep it up! :)

[Ashish]

Thank you for reading this :)

[Sira YR]

You're very welcome and I am looking forward to reading and reviewing more of your works :)

[Kevin Gerardo]

Such a great piece of poem. I like it.
I personally think that it is much better if you can add more details about the girl in your poetry. It can be your girlfriend, your ex, or someone who has gone. But I believe that you have your own style tho. Keep writing!

[Ashish]

Thank you for suggestion Kevin and I appreciate that..
Actually I have not anything in my mind clearly in my dreams..so I had not added description ..
I hope u understand what I mean :)

[Kevin Gerardo]

Yeah, I do understand that. Actually, I was just wondering about that girl. Great work, mate!

[Ashish]

Haha..thank you buddy :)

[tanmay7551]

Freedom of expression and innocence always win!

Good job, those are innocent emotions and sure to win love.

[Ashish]

May your words come true, thank you :)

[Michael X]

I can feel the inspiration behind this, the clarity of the thoughts make this poem easy to understand, good job!

[Ashish]

Thanks Michael for reviewing this piece :)

[Swati Nayak]

bah bah nice attempt...
but if you could have described the girl or the ambience in your dreams I mean if you remember it would add to the beauty of the poem......au sabu ta thik acchi

[Ashish]

But seriously ..
Except "keep it up" from her ..kichi b mane naahi mora

[Nickdykstra]

Great experience youve encountered. Good detail buddy, keep it up.

[Ashish]

Hey..Thank you for reading nick :)

[Nickdykstra]

Welcome..:-)

[Poetic Angel]

Its a beautifully poetic expression..

[Ashish]

You think so! thank you...
Well I am immature in writing but your words encouraged me... thank you for reading this :)