Promise

You promised me...
To love and to cherish for all eternity,
You'd never leave.
Where are you now?
Is the blood swollen , rampaging fiend
that I see before me,
the very man I love!
Where is your compassion?
your justice, your happiness,
your sanity... your love?
The sea of darkness
Which my heart melts upon
My consternation and trepidation bleeds from your veins,
The one sided war wages forever more...
Do I learn to love your insanity?
Or do I trust...
The promise we swore upon our love.

Author's Note

Hi, can you please give me some advice on how this is, this is one of my first poems that I wrote, also if this offends anyone or represents anyone I would like to deeply apologise for that. Thank you and looking forward to hearing from you soon
Ps. Please correct me on the punctuation, thank you

Reviews

[Jupiter]

This is absolutely incredible...your words are beautiful Relinquae. Punctuation makes it flow but also very powerful. I love this so much.

[Relinqua]

Ah thank you Jupiter, looking forward to your works:)