Sights

An old quatrain that I wrote years ago. It was written to show the duality of perspective through imagery and deeper meaning. Everyone obtains something different from this piece. Open to review only.

 

All I see before me is what I’ve seen before.

All I hear above me, I’ve never heard before.

Shadows fall in front of me as sunlight fades behind.

All the things I’ve never known, I always keep in mind.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

You're not kidding about deeper meaning. Something tells me that this is about memories... or hopes for the future, perhaps? :P Then again, when I come up with something that matches this poem, a verse squashes it. :P lol. I really like this piece, nonetheless. It's like a really neat puzzle that I actually want to finish! lmao!

"All the things I've never known, I always keep in mind"... That line gave me a revelation (and it's my favorite)! I think I get "Expect the unexpected" out of this entire quatrain! It's the ultimate brain teaser. ^^

Thanks for posting this!

Ironically Yours. Blade and Blood

[.:Naiira Harlow:.]

It's a very deep piece and I love how you can describe things is such short words. Very well done indeed!

[Jules]

Wow, this was a really deep piece of writing. I think I read each line and then paused for a good two minutes to interpret it. It reminds me of memories and the past. I especially love the first two lines, they're a lot different then something that's normally written. Good work!

[DANGER]

that last line really cleaned everything up. I, now have a relationship with your words.

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, I really dug this piece, great work. Congrats, to the win!

jkb

[Imperfection]

Can I just say wow?
I liked it so much I'm saving it.

Thanks so much for entering it into my contest.