Heaven's Reign

This poem is written in a dual perspective between that of demons and angels and an imminent second war in heaven. -Could be interchanged to either "Supernatural/Occult," or "Lyrics."-

Arise. Strike down the impotent defense.

Let the invasion of heaven commense,

And break this tyranny.

Descend. Meet the resistance,

Defend with consistence.

Uphold the hierarchy.

 

This war can only be won by our hand.

Its here we make our stand.

Destroy their monarchy.

Repel this invasion.

Enforce their dissuasion.

Give life to this sortie.
 

Charge and end this heaven's reign.

Let the blood of the angel's stain,

The soul of the purest son.

Fall back to the fires you spawn.

This heaven is ours. Be gone.

This battle has just begun.

Author's Note

This is the first real "draft" that I've posted, but as of now, it's what I consider done enough to mention.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

I definitely agree with Dawn E. Key; to be specific (in my own opinion, of course), the demons and angels remind me too much of America and Britain... in the 1700s: fed-up demons trying to free their souls from the unpleasant flames of Hell, rebelling against the (alleged) Heavenly ghosts of God, who try their sincerest best to keep these "demons" in their place and in their control.

This poem reflects deeply on humanity, in general, and I think you did an absolutely excellent in creating that metaphor, intentionally or not. This was very creative and I applaud you for it. Kudos to you.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Kaitlin W. Blaylock]

this could very well turn into an epic poem. I would love this to continue with an actual story line. this is a wonderful beginning.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, I love this poem. It's been so long since I've read your work but I really love your style. You did a great job on this, awesome write!!!

Heather

[Nik Dendera]

Quite clearly, a writer below has absolutely no concept of Muse. Follow the Muse, let it lead you down into the murky depts of the human soul where true horror resides. One must wonder if this was even read by said writer.

Perosnally, I found it to be lyrical, and somewhat relevant in todays global situation. I have often asked if Angels and demons cannot get along, then how can man? Though I keep my religious views to myself these days, I find your use of religious imagery to be intreging.

Your style is yours and yours alone. Don't change it. Who cares where the Muse takes you, just so long as you understand it. And from what I have read, you do.

[Cats Eye]

It has such strong usage of words, i like it

[THE BLACK SEAL]

when i reviewed this piece earlier i did not explain myself more fully.. what i meant to say was that i felt that this type of scenario has been done time and again. I would be intereted to see a new take on it completely. There is a lot there to work with, seemingly restricted but it could be really enriched a lot. I did not mean anything detrimental to your art or anything like that. I merely meant that there is a lot of room for greatness with you. You have the potential to really go far, and i want to see you do it. You have everything you need, you just need to be assured that it is there and be freed to go out and make your splash.

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This is a neat poem/lyrics. It really gives a strong message and it is clear that there is about to be a very long war with many values to be one. It reminds me of a general giving his speech right before the battle of the day. It is intimidating if you are on the other side. It's good.