Pan

No, not Peter Pan. =)

Gazing electricity

Through the darkened,

Humid room

While questions stutter

From her lips

And laughter rolls

Off of him in waves.

Not processing the what

Or the why,

Just the who.

All that counts,

Is they are kindred

Soul-searchers.

Author's Note

I feel like my writing is just getting more and more abstract. Either way, enjoy.

Reviews

[Anahat]

Creativity at its peak!
Lovely write :)

[Saddam]

This is one of creative and imaginative work..
Just enjoyed it.

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

This is so creative! I love the abstract feeling. I'm kind of speechless on how to describe this but I really liked it, it's like I could feel it in my heart

[joshua deathdealer]

Very different and intriguing. Defiantly enjoyed this one.

[anne]

its different and so nice...:))

[Frozen Eyes]

Sometimes the "what", "why" and "how" dont matter.. Its the "who" that matters...
Its different i like it :)

[Skai Rain]

When I saw that this was titled "Pan" I immediately thought of Greek Mythology. Kind of confused on the title. Either way, this is a great work in it's own right. Very cute. Thanks for sharing.

[katnisscat]

I liked reading this. Thanks for sharing! It's simple and a very pretty poem. I don't get why it's called pan though. Can anyone explain that to me? Thank you.

[jennifer little]

amazing and wonderful work here keep up the good work your poem had a wonderful flow to it keep on writing