Sloth (Seven Deadly Sins Series)

Sloth (Seven Deadly Sins Series)

A Chapter by Ashira Macy
"

A Senryu.

"

Words can be daunting


Both in coming and going.


Simply let me doze…



© 2014 Ashira Macy


Author's Note

Ashira Macy
I have challenged myself to write poems for each of the Seven Deadly Sins, each in a different form. A Senryu seemed perfect for Sloth. Comments? Suggestions?

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LOL...I love this short and sweet, indeed signifying sloth...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

Haha, thank you! This one gave me the idea for the series.
I see what you mean. A senyru is short and doesn't require much writing.But of course a senyru can be quite a challenge to a really slothful person.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

Very true. I considered making Sloth's poem simply "zzzzzzzzzz..." but I thought that might be going.. read more
And so our little girl
she needed to doze

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

Yes sir! This was the easiest to write (not surprisingly).
John Preston

10 Years Ago

If all where like that.
Seven deadly sins? Wow! Great idea... Nyc work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

Thanks Priscilla, glad you enjoyed this.
for a lazy person everything is same... words or no words he will always enjoy his own company.. short and to the point.. nice work Ashira :)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing Raj!

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Added on July 31, 2014
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Tags: Seven Deadly Sins, sloth, Dante's Inferno, sins, deadly, seven


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Ashira Macy
Ashira Macy

Martinez, CA



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