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This one really touched my my sweet friend, I don't know what happened, but it feels like he donated something to her, by your words. What a great piece, of family love, and unconditional selflessness.
Thank you for sharing such a personal piece.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much my friend, I am glad this one spoke to you. He was a very important man in my fami.. read moreThank you so much my friend, I am glad this one spoke to you. He was a very important man in my family's life and it was heart wrenching when he left, but I do believe his essence helped my cousin through a very rough time.
10 Years Ago
It's just beautiful, there is such a bond, (and I say is) for it's still there. I just know it... yo.. read moreIt's just beautiful, there is such a bond, (and I say is) for it's still there. I just know it... you are welcome my dear friend, your writings, each and everyone of them, touch me deeply.
Very poignant and filled with love for the gifting of someone. Especially emotional because a child is involved. I like the 1st two and the last two lines.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you much dear, this one is older, written a little after my cousin was born, and very importan.. read moreThank you much dear, this one is older, written a little after my cousin was born, and very important to me. =)
This one really touched my my sweet friend, I don't know what happened, but it feels like he donated something to her, by your words. What a great piece, of family love, and unconditional selflessness.
Thank you for sharing such a personal piece.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much my friend, I am glad this one spoke to you. He was a very important man in my fami.. read moreThank you so much my friend, I am glad this one spoke to you. He was a very important man in my family's life and it was heart wrenching when he left, but I do believe his essence helped my cousin through a very rough time.
10 Years Ago
It's just beautiful, there is such a bond, (and I say is) for it's still there. I just know it... yo.. read moreIt's just beautiful, there is such a bond, (and I say is) for it's still there. I just know it... you are welcome my dear friend, your writings, each and everyone of them, touch me deeply.
gathering he gave her an organ maybe in transplant...and yes, she will not only understand and appreciate that someday...she will appreciate this poem for sure...
and he is looking down, smiling.
jacob
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Something along those lines. =) I am sure he would be very proud of how far she has come.
I am 24 years old and just getting back into writing after not using the skill for a few years, so I am a bit rusty. I am excited to share my new work as well as some old with this community and would.. more..