To My Big BrotherA Chapter by Victor CartelI wrote this when my brother and I were in a fight for a bellwork assignment in Creative Writing. The assignment was "Write something you want to say to someone, but never would."
You have no idea
how much you truly mean.
You really are so
very much to me.
Your brotherly love
makes my worst day bright
and sadly, even Dre
can't compare this time.
When you say
"I'm proud of you, sissy"
I feel so accomplished
and so happy
It's really hard to say
these things to you, however
Because as much as I care
your commitment issues get in the way.
I feel you slipping away
and it makes me feel so sad
that telling you is
just plain impossible for me.
But I truly love you lots
and even though we may not be
"forever and eternity"
I still love you like my brother
© 2012 Victor CartelAuthor's Note
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Added on February 27, 2011 Last Updated on May 31, 2012 AuthorVictor CartelWestminster, COAboutCheck the about me page on my website, Ashira's Notebook, for an extensive survey about myself. more..Writing
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