Rain Dancer: A Sorta Original Song

Heavily based on the song "Rapunzel" by Emilie Autumn. Check out my progress on this project here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6ODLltScfc

Though my lyrics are meant to be sung to the tune of I do not own, nor claim to own Emilie Autumn's music.  The original song is "Rapunzel" by Emilie Autumn, and belongs to her and the other rightful owners - NOT ME.  Without permission, I have used the tune of her song for these lyrics [which I do own].  Please don't sue me for that, since it's kinda ok by US law to do this for educational purposes.  Thanks - you're a doll.
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Water pouring...
Pounding down on my window.
Hesitantly...
Placing fingers down onto wood.
It's cold as I am now.
Is loneliness
All there is?

I don't care for cliche's
yet they're all that seems to be on my mind
Why is it hard to say
that I still love you just the same?
No matter what you do
I'll still be right here for you
No I won't stop falling [for you]

Unlocked the window
Put my hand outside in the rain
Palm faced upwards
I just felt the heat of a flame
I could be crazy, but
It felt like love
You're still my dove

I don't care for cliche's
yet they're all that seems to be on my mind
Why is it hard to say
that I still love you just the same?
No matter what you do
I'll still be right here for you
No I can't stop falling [for you]

The loudest cliche now
"I love you so,
I'll let you go..."

I don't care for cliche's
yet they're all that seems to be on my mind
Why is it hard to say
that I still love you just the same?
No matter what you do
I'll still be right here for you
No I won't stop falling [for you]

You're my rain-dancing muse
And I'll always be here for you
I've completely fallen [for you]

Check out my progress on [and possibly become a part of] this project here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6ODLltScfc

Author's Note

I am not sure if I want those ending lines to be what they are, or if I'd rather them be:

"No matter what you do
I'll still be here for you
I've completely fallen for you"

If nothing else, please at least clarify which of the two you prefer.

PICTURE NOT MINE. EMILIE AUTUMN'S MUSIC ALSO ISN'T MINE...the lyrics I wrote above are though.