Words. . . What else?

Words. . . What else?

A Poem by Ashinna
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Random, Clash bang...result? this.

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Can you feel the wind
Caressing every inch of your body
as you push into the distance
Reaching for more
Clouds pass by
The sky sings a song of depressing times
You shake your head to forget the thoughts
This is not you.
Faster, Farther...Away.
Take time
you need it..
re-take old pictures of your life,
or at least touch them up
For the road only drags on from here.
 

© 2010 Ashinna


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This really speaks to me here. You have this powerful feeling inside yourself that feels like it has taken you over, and you cannot begin to express it through poetry because it so strong. Well you did a great job for this feeling. This is the most frustrating feeling you may ever have, the sense of the unknown. It kills because you have the experiences, the reasons, but when it's time to write your own writing, you can't just say, "Well here's the story..." because it would ruin the purpose. Continue writing, get inspired, whenever you think of a certain way to express it, tuck it away and don't forget it. Man, all I can say is I feel this way ....I feel this way every day.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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simply amazing, and yet so sad

Posted 14 Years Ago


This really speaks to me here. You have this powerful feeling inside yourself that feels like it has taken you over, and you cannot begin to express it through poetry because it so strong. Well you did a great job for this feeling. This is the most frustrating feeling you may ever have, the sense of the unknown. It kills because you have the experiences, the reasons, but when it's time to write your own writing, you can't just say, "Well here's the story..." because it would ruin the purpose. Continue writing, get inspired, whenever you think of a certain way to express it, tuck it away and don't forget it. Man, all I can say is I feel this way ....I feel this way every day.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ashinna
Ashinna

Prince George, Canada



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I'm 16. I love writing, its how I express myself. It's how I let go, learn, writing calms me. I am now 20. Looking back at my writing. I miss myself. So here I am, to write again. more..

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