Dont you dare

I exist

Dont you dare
Dont you care
Wont you care
Wont you dare
Its up to you
Make a choice
Open up your voice
Make some noise
Happy or sad your choice
Failures are there
I have my share
The god doesnt care
He is there to laugh
He have enough staff
Still cant catch me
Because he also know
I am not here to bow.

Reviews

[paari]

a strong poem about oneself and the importance of choices. people must have an attitude that they are the center of their universe. They must know that they exist and make everyone feel that too. I enjoyed the read.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Great write but the line "The god doesnt care
He is there to laugh
He have enough staff
Still cant catch me
Because he also know
I am not here to bow."
Kinda disappoint me! God is there to help U, if U firmly believe!

[Ashwin Thakur]

Ok behen next time i will not dissapoint you
Dont see up
Dont see down
I am there to reduce your frown
Believe me or dont your choice
I am with you in your voice.
Thik hai behen

[Destiny Dreamer]

Plz don't get offended by my words! I really didn't mean to hurt your feelings, what you wrote was beautiful, passionate but you must believe in your GOD! :)

[Ashwin Thakur]

See what you said now
Your god
Its mine its yours its everybodys

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah but we are from two different religions, I know there is only one GOD! But as far as I know, your beliefs are different!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hmmmm.........quite a challenge.......
powerful and passionate......
beautiful and thoughtful write!!!
:)
p.s. a few minor grammatical errors.

[Ashwin Thakur]

Ha ha uspar dhyan doonga bhai

[Pushkar Prabhat]

jarur......koi baat nhi!!! hota hai!!! :D :) :)