Little Fly

There are people who wanted to be on top all the time, but sometimes it good to be contented on what you have and what you are

                                     

Little fly,
Staring at the tree.
Trying to reach, what he see.

Little fly,
Looking at the sky.
He spreads his wings, trying to fly.

Little fly,
Went on the place nearby.
Hoping to be kingfishers as they fly.

Little fly,
Stop wishing stronger than a bee.
Even like those birds you see.

Little fly,
Just look and observe thee.
Stop pushing yourself, higher than a tree.

Little fly,
Don't try to deny.
Just be true to yourself, stop telling a lie.

Author's Note

Just having a simple poem here

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Simple, but still clever. You did great, and this one has a clear message: don't wish for things you can't possibly have. Well done.

[B]

I like this piece
Acceptance of all the blessings one has is the key to a good life
Sometimes flying too high only ends up with a great fall

I know the feeling

Thank you for sharing your work .... Its quite well written

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we should be happy with who we are---accept and make the most of it...instead of always wanting something that is out of reach---the grass isn't always greener on the other side...and the other tree isn't always taller and more full.

[Ashadan]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate your comment sir =)
the other tree isn't always taller and more full. (really poetic ^_^)

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work!
I agree with Brittany, simple piece that has a really good message,
I like the closing stanza it really ties the whole piece together:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ashadan]

Thank you my friend =) I'm glad that you like the simplicity of this write-up.

[613]

This one is simple & sweet. Sometimes, late at night, it's calming to read something simplistic rather than complex.

Nice work.

- Brittney

[Ashadan]

Thank you for the compliment ^_^

[613]

You're welcome!