Little Fly

There are people who wanted to be on top all the time, but sometimes it good to be contented on what you have and what you are

                                     

Little fly,
Staring at the tree.
Trying to reach, what he see.

Little fly,
Looking at the sky.
He spreads his wings, trying to fly.

Little fly,
Went on the place nearby.
Hoping to be kingfishers as they fly.

Little fly,
Stop wishing stronger than a bee.
Even like those birds you see.

Little fly,
Just look and observe thee.
Stop pushing yourself, higher than a tree.

Little fly,
Don't try to deny.
Just be true to yourself, stop telling a lie.

Author's Note

Just having a simple poem here

Reviews

[anamika]

simplicity is the true way to express oneself

[Mamta Vashisht]

Very nice and sweet poem with the message of being true to self.I liked it..:-)

[Ashadan]

thank you for stopping by =)

[George Peck]

great poem. nice simple and beautiful. thanks for sharing

[Ashadan]

Thank you for stopping by. i really appreciate it =)

[Saddam]

Little fly,
Stop wishing stronger than a bee.
Even like those birds you see.

Beautiful and valuable massage in it friend....

[Ashadan]

Thanks for reviewing this one my friend. I'm glad to hear it =)

[cloakedone]

um cute? i get the message ...

[Ashadan]

thanks that you get it :)

[cloakedone]

nothing to it

[RiverRei]

I like the message behind this. Everyone needs to learn to be themselves and not compare himself/herself to anyone else. We are all unique individuals, not to be compared. Thanks for sharing this with me :)

[Ashadan]

Im glad that you like it. Thanks for stopping by

[sereenaoutloud]

So true some times we strive so much that we forget to just be content in the now..

[Ashadan]

definitely true =) . Thanks for stopping by.

[Edgar Frost Lovecraft]

I really enjoy the way this poem flows, and almost classical nature of this poem. It reminds me of an almost Robert Frost like work, but truly original, and well written.

[Ashadan]

Thanks for the compliment my friend =)

[Edgar Frost Lovecraft]

Anytime, fellow poet :)

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work my friend... sometimes it's great to be content.

[Ashadan]

Thank you for appreciating my work my friend =)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very contemplating, thinking about the relativity of things. Thanks you for sharing. :) Rudi

[Ashadan]

I should be the one thanking you =) thank you for the compliments