Love Similes in Games

A poem having a semi-sonnet format

Blissfulness you felt on a Candy Crush,

Where Sugar Crush is as sweet as your smile;

Allure you have is like a Diamond Dash,

And like in Tetris having a good pile,

Picture I.Q. surely not make one snore.

For it needs focus to answer it all;

Like your looks that has revealing galore,

That catches attention like a super mall;

Having you is like in Social Empires.

Where I need good strategies to prove my worth.

That even I'm from GnomeTown, I'm a sire,

 And for God's sake, I'm a king not a smurf.

                 If our love is in the Criminal Case,

                 This will be the crime they can never chase.

          

Reviews

[Peggy-Lou]

very figurative and open to interpretation - like it :)

[Ashadan]

I'm glad for your compliments . Thank you for stopping by =)

[gabrielle]

What a way to describe someone of beauty and intelligence. Clever write :)

[Ashadan]

thank you! Than you for stopping by. ^_^ Be well out there

[Princeps Magnus Astrum ..]

very good! intriguing style, but if i may, have you tried 'free verse' ? This sounds excellent at the moment, because of the imagery it brings, if you had done this in say... free verse, it would be 100/100. you get 90 from me! but keep up the good work, i hope to see more!

[Ashadan]

thank your review ^_^ .. Be well. Im glad that you read it =)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Beautiful:) Its really a nice write. You get 100 points from me.

[Ashadan]

hehehe, Thank you so much For that Inspiring review. I'm glad to be acquainted with great writers like you in this site

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome:) and thanks. I'm not that great though...but thank you:)

[Ashadan]

You're always welcome =)

[An owl on the moon]

I love the playfulness of your words... the games of thoughts... and the structure lends itself perfectly, giving your work both a fresh and ancient feel. So well done.

[Ashadan]

thank you for stopping by.. I'm glad that you like it ^_^

[Lydia Shutter]

Very clever use of game titles in this playfully written poem. Lydi**

[Ashadan]

Thank for your short comment yet it gives me an inspiration to continue writing =)

[Saddam]

Play with Games, Just an outstanding play.
Good one friend, But I only understand the cricket language.

[Ashadan]

Thank you =) Thank you for stopping by

[Jamestown]

I'm playing fifa as we speak and love the game metaphor:)
Great piece of work thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ashadan]

I'm glad that you checked on it. I appreciated the effort ^_^ Thanks

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

A bit aimed at game players, and seems silly to one who is not. However, if the object of your affection is a gamer, in that case this is a winning strategy.

[Ashadan]

thank you for your review, I only have this poem since I observed that mostly teenagers today are Technology-minded, so I'm hoping that this will fit to this 21st century ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of thoughts create a interesting and fun poem to read. You did very well create good place and vision with your words. I did like the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ashadan]

Thank you for stopping by. you're comment added another push in my mind to continue writing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad and you are welcome. Writing is a lifetime goal. We are always learning.

[Ashadan]

definitely true !!!!!