Loves' pain

No longer able to love
Her shattered heart
Continues to bleed.

No longer able to breathe
Her tired lungs
Gasping for breath.

No longer able to smile
Her joy has all gone
Turned to dust.

No longer able to cry
The pain has gotten too deep
Tears can’t flow

No longer able to think
All her thoughts
On the pain.

Reviews

[Heather Anne]

I didnt see these reviews until tonight, but thanks so much you three. Diwakar your comments are very inspiring and Tai as well, thank you! You guys keep me writing :)

[Bitter Overdose]

Short and *bitter*. Does , indeed, pretty much say it all about what one feels sometimes.

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

"No longer able to review,
such strong emotions,
in midst of chaos indeed"

I like your writing..........nice one :-)

[Tai Ryens]

Amazing poem about what one person goes through when they're in pain. Great job!