What an Enthralling Women

A little siren type story I sleepily wrote at 3am

The sound of waves crashing upon the rocks was why I had initially awoken but as I came to, the unknown surroundings were what truly sent me into a state of hyperawareness. The cold stones that I laid upon were unfamiliar and the lovely noise that echoed a damp cave, while beautiful, was also alarming. As my vision started to refocus, I saw the boat that I had come in on shattered against a few boulders protruding from the dark ocean, and resting atop one of them was an enthralling woman, pale skin and slender in figure. Her blonde hair falling gracefully below her waist covered her seemingly naked body in a beautiful wavy fashion. I slowly stood to my feet and quietly started walking toward her. Her mouth slightly agape revealing a set of unnaturally sharp teeth and a sweet melody seeped from her lips, one that no human musician could ever replicate. I tried stepping a bit closer for a better view, but my hefty footsteps must have caught her attention. The singing had stopped, all that was left was the eerie sound of waves reverberating in the cave and my breath heaving heavily as I watched her. She slowly turned until her whole body was faced toward me, her figure was unlike any woman’s I had ever seen, a perfectly shaped jawline, long slender legs, and an hourglass waist. I stood there in amazement for a moment until in a flash she lunged toward me with an unhinged jaw, teeth shining a pearly white. I tried to get out of the way, but she was too quick and took a chunk of flesh from my left shoulder then landed harshly on all fours. I fell to my knees wincing in pain until my adrenaline started pumping. Locking eyes with the now beastly woman I picked up a stalagmite resting on the floor and rushed toward her with full force. Like an irritated bull she charged back on all fours with a sadistic grin pasted on her face. Once again foolishly lunging at my face I held up the stone in defense, she chomped down forcefully, shattering the stone into pieces. I mustered up as much strength as I could and kicked her right ribcage sending us to opposite ends of the cave. As I rose once more with the little strength I had left and braced myself for another attack, but as I looked up there was no ravenous women barreling toward me. She just laid there completely still, and so cautiously I started walking up to her. In a miraculous stroke of luck, I had kicked her just far enough for her head to land on a huge stalagmite erected from the ground impaling and killing her instantly. Yet even now as I write this and await a passing ship for rescue, her hair still lays gracefully over her body, and she is still the most enthralling women I will ever have the pleasure of seeing.

Author's Note

I wanted to get more detailed in this story, but toward the end i was getting tired so i kind of gave up XD.
Let me know what you think/what i need to work on