2 High School Haikus

Two haikus I wrote in high school.

Earth is fading while

Spiraling on an axis

Faulty genetics

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His skull was fractured

Dripping on to the table

It looked like red ink

Reviews

[Tsubaki Kuro]

pretty good haikus there. great job.

[. serah .]

-- ah, a very interesting take on "faulty genetics"...

-- the second one is a little too macabre for me but still brilliantly written... (especially for someone who is still in high school)