Hell's Sojourn

Another Poem about Proselytizing Atheists, particularly inspired by the bleating of one Sad soul who Quotes Castro, Chavez, Chomsky, & doesn't believe in morality, much less God.

 

HELL’S SOJOURN

 

Pity the blind that cannot see

For the sake of

What they could never be

Having Themselves

Done the deed

Injected

Crippling disease

That rots the soul

Blurs the whole

Shattering Its Windows

Mingling all as one

Individuality thrown

Asunder

For rigid Ideology

Of hell's Sojourn

 

2-28-09

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Author's Note

If you hate Theists keep it to yourself :) or better yet Write YOUR OWN POEM :P

Reviews

[Gandré]

The hell - is right now.

perfectly stated.
loved it!
great succinct style.