Twin Skies

A Poem by Asderathos

its short

TWIN SKIES

Grey distance
A misty ocean
Stretching from twin shores
To twin skies
Why do ocean birds only cry?
Why do forest birds only sing?
What difference the distance?
The Blue Ocean & sky
The clouded earth & sea of trees

October-November 2007
113

© 2009 Asderathos

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This is very well written and it made me think. I never really thought about stuff like this before...and you make it sound so beautiful. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Refreshing concept of the endless horizon. Contradistinction between the forces and elements of life. Mythical and light. Reveals the secrets we question ourselves about day after day.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 29, 2009

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Asderathos

San Jaoquin Valley, CA

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