Someone's Pulling On My Ribcage

Someone's Pulling On My Ribcage

A Poem by Emilee Undead
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Someone's pulling on my ribcage and ripping something out...

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Pin prick.
That quick.
Quick twist.
Swift rip.
Slip, slip, slip.

And it's gone.

© 2008 Emilee Undead


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ahhh, to be in love...I'm assuming it's your heart that's gone.
Short and sweet.
I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on March 5, 2008
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Emilee Undead
Emilee Undead

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi, I'm Emilee. I loove to write poetry and stories (obviously). I have some problems with plot, so I'm working on that. I do enjoy constructive criticism on everything, though. n__n; So, I'm here to .. more..

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