Him and her.

Him and her.

A Poem by -TheWounded-
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I have noo idea, honestly.

"

IF the world only knew,

Maybe they already do,

This can't be love,

Cause she was an angel from above.

 

She has beautiful blonde hair,

Hazel eyes that gleam like the sun,

A perfect body that every girl wants,

She is just perfect.

 

 

She actually cried today,

I saw a tear fall from her eye,

I told her this love couldn't last,

It would have to be over.

 

 

As she left crying, I worried for her health,

I hope she didn't do anything drastic,

I hope she doesn't kill herself,

But all I can do is hope.

 

 

She went home that night,

She cried tell she had no tears left,

Then, she called him,

He answered and she said she loved him.

 

He ran to her as fast as he could,

He was just to late,

She slit her wrists,

There she lay in a pool of blood.

 

He was just to late,

This must have been fate,

She loved him,

The love between them was hiddin within.

 

He held her in his arms,

She lay cold and still,

He saw a thin sheet of paper,

On it was a little note.

 

 

He read her note and began to cry,

He couldn't believe this was his fault,

She just loved him to much,

Never to let anyone else have her.

 

 

He began to read the note out loud,

Here is what he read:

I'm sorry this had to happen,

I loved you so much I just couldn't take it anymore.

I hope you don't do the same. I'm sorry you have to read this,

and if it upsets you, Just know I love you.

 

Both of them were found the next day,

In a pool of blood they lay,

He was holding her in his arms,

His wrists were slit.

 

They found the note,

But on it was something new,

Written on the note in blood,

It said:

I'm sorry that I broke your heart.

If you would have known how I felt it could have been different.

I had to hold you for one last time.

 

Their last words were never heard.

Now she lays with him in heaven.

Hand in hand, together forever.

© 2009 -TheWounded-


Author's Note

-TheWounded-
I don't really know where I was going with this piece. Thanks for all your reviews though.

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Whoa... This is amazing. I think you need to rewrite the 4th stanza, though. There's just something there that doesn't go with the rest of this awesome poem.

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Added on October 2, 2009

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-TheWounded-
-TheWounded-

Bismarck , ND



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I am a 14, almost 15 year old girl. I have been through alot in my life, non of which I think you want to hear about, so I won't waste your time and mine. I write mostly when depressed, but sometimes .. more..

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