False hopelessness

The world hasn't ended, not yet.

Casted onto the fields of isolation

they left him there, among the generations of disregarded souls

souls of no reviving hope, an empty void filled their eyes

Here dwells the people who THINK they are outcasts

who formed their own perception that everyone is against them

who made themselves to believe that their weakness has finally defeated them

They look at their inner weakness as a great army marching forward

but they never looked behind to see their own powerful army

which is immensely large and far superior

And they lose hope...

Reviews

[Dheeraj]

You started with creative ingenuity, but then took a turn directly into the abyss, and your meaning scattered.