There is a way

This is how a typical teen life is, almost all of us go through it I did too, 100 years(not necessarily, but you get the point) of human existence, the teen age seems to be the most dynamic of all.

The world might be falling, the heavens might be raging with fire, the angels wings might be burning 

but maybe thats just me, maybe thats just my heart mourning, for my soul is dying

Its hard, its hard to see The way, if there is any way.

I don’t care if I shed a brief but bright light, but there must be light

Darkness must be swirling around me, but I won’t go down without a fight

I don’t…maybe I can’t see myself in the mirror, there is just the body but no light in the eyes

Is there really a way out, or is it all a bunch of lies 

But I know how this Dark, took control of me, how it got stronger

Because I allowed it! Yes I did! I stepped aside whenever he demands a fight

Its me who convince myself that it is harmless and that, thats why he grew larger

Until he became so strong and mighty and and…I finally saw who it is…I finally met my creation, there was no light

There is no way! Don’t you see, but why haven’t I admitted defeat yet, 

I can still see its rage, its anger…it is still fighting me, I haven’t lost yet,

I created him, I can destroy him again, and again and again no matter how many times it comes at me

This is my battle, my fight and only I can defeat this Darkness, its just you and me

There is a way, a new way, a path less traveled, at the end of this trail is a light far more brighter than any known path

Then…why don’t everyone take this path? Why its a path less traveled? Because its hard

Here, they have to battle their darkest enemy, their innermost enemy, their haunting pasts, who wants to do that?

I will

I have found a way, to starve this creature to death, to scare him away, to weaken him, make it suffer…

It is strong, but I am stronger, this time I am angry, I am on fire! And I will suck the life out of creature.

I have found a way. 

Reviews

[Joel Armstrong]

I liked the material you have here.some small grammar mistakes here and there.use a determiners i.e: this/ in the last line.
Your poem does speak an ugly truth which happens to most of us of our age.hell I'm 16 too.I've been through the things u portrayed above.we let our demons get the better of us,it determines how we act in our llife.
Overall a good poem.do write more.: )

[Aryan Purohit]

Well, thats not the finest of the poems, just have to keep writing for 10 more years until I produce a masterpiece! Yeah, some flaws are there. Anyone up for giving a critique!?