Saudade

Saudade : A deep melancholy or nostalgia felt when yearning for someone who is not there.

Oh, just come back to me,

Just remind me how happy we used to be,

That would be more than enough for me.

Oh, but if you could just come back to me,

But you left because you wanted to be free.

Still here I am looking for signs,

Wishing for your cameo in my dreams,

Yet nothing happens to show that you care,

You seem to be perfectly unaware.

Reviews

[¿]

One's carving and the another isn't even aware......
Huh....every now and then I think you want me to come show up at your door...but am just too afraid that I'll be wrong....
Sorry for humming this song here...but I could dig your poem that deep as I feel hearing this song!
This wish may reach to where it tends to go😊

[Arya]

That's exactly what I felt while writing this !

[¿]

Really...cool😀!!
And you did pen it well😊

[Arya]

Thank you💓

[¿]

Hehe...welcome sweel gal!😊

[Mrudula Rani]

Eu senti sua saudade de alguém que você ama tanto! = I felt your longing for that some one you love so much ! You brought the meaning of the word beautifully.

[Arya]

Thank you for you encouraging review :))

[Arya]

Sry , *your.

[Davidgeo]

I learned a word today.

It's probably about a person but I pretended it was about a bird.

[Arya]

Why a bird ? Any particular reason? Just curious...

[Davidgeo]

Have you ever heard the saying "if you love something set it free, and if comes back, it's yours. If not it was never meant to be"? When I was little my mother had a piece of art with that saying on a painting of a bird flying out of a cage. It's not completely apt for your poem but it reminded me of that none the less.

[Arya]

Just asked because after you mentioned 'bird' I started to look at my poem from a new perspective. Beautiful saying.Thanks for sharing.