'Ayden & Adele' part 1

Once upon at time...there was a girl named Adele...

And she was the most

beautiful baby girl Ever

who was known in

the Kingdom

 

Her hair as golden wheat

and her hazel eyes as late

Autumn day who still

remember those gone

    summer days

 

She grew up in love

and during the peace

King and Queen loved

her very much

 

It took 16 years and

and they all talked

about Adele's beauty

 

She had the most

graceful face and

her hazel eyes were

laughing against

with the Sun

 

Her long golden

hair extended

at her back

 

And it happened

that a boy from the

village who had grown up

alongside Adele

fell in love with her

and she fell in love

with him

 

The boy's name was Ayden

 

He was dark haired

and he had bright

   green eyes

and he was a tall man,

strong and he was

skilled with metal

as he was son

of a blacksmith

 

'Ayden' they said

'he's gonna be

something'

 

But Ayden, he loved

Adele who was a princess

and he was the son of

a blacksmith, Adele she was

   everything for him

 

So once they swore love oaths

to each other in the garden

at the time when the wild

roses were blooming

 

       Now and Always Our

       Love Lasts Forever

 

               Ayden

 

Her smiling hazel Autumn eyes

  Her long golden hair

        like wheat

 

Her kiss lingers on his lips

   Her touch lingers on his skin

         like a breath

 

               Adele

 

His warm green eyes

   His dark hair messed up

after I hugged him and

run my fingers through his hair

 

His kiss burn my skin, my lips

   He touched my heart & soul

 

          Ayden & Adele

 

He lives in me, I live in him

She lives in me, I live in her

 

Nothing could separate them from each other 'tll thus ended the days of peace

and all men had to sign up for war. Adele was struck with grief and asked him to stay at home. It broke Ayden's heart but he could not escape his duty for his King.

 

'I'm going to defend our home for you, my love' he said sadly. 'Don't leave me, my love! My home is there where you are. If you leave me you'll take my heart with you. And if you don't come back to me how I could live without my heart?' she cried. He hugged her tightly and they kissed goodbye. She gave him a green ribbon to remind him of her. And so it was that Ayden went to war with his loyal gray horse. Blacksmith's son in glorious armor and he had his sword which he had made himself. That day Adele saw Ayden for the last time. No one heard from him, no one saw him. Only his horse was found wandering alone bareback. They looking for Ayden for a long time.

 

Her eyes had lost all joy and sorrow lived in her face and heart. Grief lived in her every move, it lived in her every breath. And it happened that eventually Adele left her home, her father and mother, to find her loved one. She took Ayden's horse and rode away without a backward glance, and never return. No one could find Adele or Ayden.

 

They say that many saw golden haired maiden with gray horse and she called 'Ayden'. She called him. And they say also that many saw a dark haired man with armor, passing on foot, who called 'Adele'. They said that the man was badly injured. After these events they were no longer seen on this Earth.

 

Only the green ribbon was found at the foot of an big oak and beside it was Ayden's sword. They found also a piece of a paper where read only a one word in Adele's shivery handwriting,

                    'Fate'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is for my own 'Ayden', he is the inspiration for this story.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KaoOlSPiAWQ

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

A very beautiful and romantic write, excellent:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

real romantic
....your green knight will soon come after he'll read this one!!!
=]

[Nish...]

WOW! You had me hooked from the very beginning to the end. It was beautiful!

[EMF]

A beautiful read, and I became entranced in your world throughout. If you can do that... you can do anyhting

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story. In the days of war. Woman will wait. Many found them selves alone. I wonder what was done for the woman who lost men in the old war? I like the tale of the princess and her love. I like the ending to the outstanding story. Myths and old story are my favorite.
Coyote

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Sarah, this is extraordinarily beautiful writing. You are truly talented! Keep writing! :-)

[BeccaB]

it made me want to read on and on and sooner than i realised i reached the end and wanted to read more and more it was truely a good read and i hope there will be moree of this in futre ^_^

[Wolfwind]

I absolutely adored this tale! Love shown through at the deepest levels and mystery as well... Epic in nature and fun to follow along it's flowing words. It brings to mind a legendary movie..."The Princess Bride" ;)

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Thea]

Aw! Such a really interesting story!
As I read the intro, it made me read more and more!
I just love the idea behind this story!
Such a beautiful song too... (Youtube link! XD)
Keep it up, Sarah! :)))